Meanderings
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...My God.....
It was a day to be alive.
Sunlight
bright enough to illuminate
the corners of your soul.
Air
that penetrated
to the bottom of your lungs
a breeze
... to bring
the rustle of the leaves
and the twitter of birds
and scratching of squirrels...
into focus.
you could feel
the pulse of the earth
beneath your feet
as it leads...
ever deeper...
into the euphoria
of just being
it is.........
almost
...enough
10 comments:
wow... I want a day like that!
Beautiful poem, Larry!
yep...that totally sums it up alrights....it was GORGEOUS today!!!!!
It was a pretty good day where I am, too! Lovely poem, even if it's not Haiku!!
Wow... amazing, that sums up my saturday perfectly.
absolutely perfect. if i could write a poem i'd be proud of for my entire life time, this is how i would want it to read. you are amazing!
hope you're having a great time in general. i have been awol in general and in specific, and hope to rectify this wrong starting now. :)
Ok Guys..........My head is going to explode. But thank you. The credit goes to the one who created that perfect moment in time, and allowed me to experience it. Rare......rare are those moments when you just absolutely like being alive.
... sweet, dude.... I loved it...
Eric
very nice
....wait a minute....
it says, "almost enough"
as in what? There's more? Can there be more? Or is it like the question, "have you lived here all your life?"
"..Not yet..."
hehehe... told ya it is good :)
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